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Re: “Azerbaijan Restaurant is a Polo Palace

This review would have been more helpful if the author hhadn't spent eight paragraphs talking about things OTHER THAN the food at the restaurant. Regional background should be limited to a few brief but descriptive sentences. The majority of the review should be about the food itself. Commentary about the background can be interwoven into the discussion of specific plates, of course. Count the paragraphs yourself. About two paragraphs are devoted to the actual food in the restaurant. Next time please focus on the food served at the restaurant.

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Posted by Roger mb on 06/17/2009 at 1:16 AM

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